Hilarious and heartfelt. You stuck to the topic like industrial strength glue with a great choice vocab and crystal clear imagery. There was a metric tonne of quotables in this:
"What's death do us part for? Don't worry before they throw on the dirt...
I'll make sure all my affairs are in order... from best blowjob to worst"
Laughed my arse off. Great compound and wordplay here.
"I'm just happy that it's over (it's not).. I see you picked those toiletries up
Now for your birthday you can leave the toilet seat up. Aw you spoil me, fuck"
So much insight into the relationship off of one couplet. Damn.
"At this rate we won't make old age together; The sincerest form of flattery
You can put me in jail and shackle me but I can endure-a-cell like a battery"
Great set up, perfect punchline. Clean as a whistle.
"Leave me alone; Oh you gonna put hands on me like our first date?
Bitch I could cut off your legs and you'd still be standoffish like a mermaid"
Funny as hell. Another great use of wordplay.
I could go on and on. This was a great microcosm of a partnership, terrifically presented. The final lines were the perfect finish, wrapped it up in a bow. Great stuff.
Rtf if you please. I'll be keeping an eye out for new drops.
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