Flow:
Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
^obscure reference not a great way to start a verse tbh
cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
^ decent liked the angle
Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
^ wording needed work here
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
^ I liked this probably best bar of your verse
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
^decent enough
bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
^ could have been worded a little better but i liked the play
Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
^ehh alright
Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout
^BANG good closer if you're familiar
Wanderer:
U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
^ could have used some better wording imo
Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
^ decent bar
I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
^ loool
Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
^lmao dope
But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
^ i liked this
Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
^ decent
Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
^ think i seen a cash flow bar couple weeks ago, not the best closer
Overall was an entertaining match but I've got Wanderer taking it, Flow lacked in execution more consistently
V/Wanderer
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