Elfo - This was a cool verse, there wasn't too much to it though and i feel like you could have expanded on your theme of Ouch's girl drowning in her drug addiction amd just relating it more to the topic a little more, but beside that point i cracked a smile at the comedy here and i loved the title "Hennesea" lol i liked it man just thought if you were going at a meta approach you can at least expand on it and make it topically sound.
Hal0 - Another verse with a lot of layers to it. I don't know if I'm just not getting the narrative here or what but this just feels like some decent imagery and Oceanic references randomly distributed with no bigger purpose included. I liked some of the visions you described but there was just no concrete narrative to tie it to.
V/Elfo better piece, more engaging, want to vote for Hal0 he had a lot of potential but it ultimately didn't amount to anything
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