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Old 05-10-2020, 09:54 AM   #8
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vulgar, i think this may be in contendership for votw. for something so short, it was able to tell a complete and concise story with message and everything. This was almost like those annoying Hollywood tropes of a complete stranger coming in and saving the day ie. last samurai, fern gully, avatar lulz, but this had that extra layer of compassion and kindness, made easy enough to tug at certain strings but not done in a saccharine way. awesome.

pharaoh, i actually enjoyed this alot. it does fall into the trope category but it worked really well with your style now. the bare bone approach was straight and to the point that it almost reflect the rawness of the subject matter. it would be dope if there was less of this is good, this is bad conclusion because the verse seems to dictate it so.

v/ vulgar because ultimately it came down to entertainment and i was more intrigue by his verse this week. good showing on pharoah though.
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