noetic, ok this is a verse about writing which fits the picture perfectly. there were mentions of curse so i'm assuming the big creature behind the writer is that curse. The style here is very punchy. like the lines comes off as punchlines which was very cool. i'm just a little unclear on what this verse was really about. there are self referential stuff like actually talking about text then there were stuff about god and things like that and im just like what's going on? its highly likely that im just me not cultured enough to get it but i do like the style of writing. very nice.
blue, glad you were able to get it in this week my man. yo this was dope in its simplicity. You didn't try to go all metaphorical or elaborate with the story, the verse seems to be about the honesty and genuineness of youth. As someone who looks back often, i find lots to like about this verse. Its sad in its longing, but inspirational in its (re)discovery you know? awesome.
i think both verse had this quirky style about it but i think from sheer entertainment and relatability, i have to go with blue bayou
v/ blue
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