Til I stepped up wit dem heavy hits, even rookie champ summin youll never be thought of kid
Shit... you'll be living under my feat longer then Fritzls daughter did
-Can’t give you points for a feat line. Had to google the reference. Not a great start for me.
cus If Wonderland a hit I'll grab his face an press up the gat
An pistol whip his grill till it's spread across his face like the Cheshire cat
-Would’ve rather you use the Wonderland as the main concept and build around that. The way you did it is just ok to me.
Too whack to construct a line, youd need a guide to teach you why shmuck
Wandering concepts until it's no wonder why they all look so dried up
-Not feeling this.
Bitch you been trash for a heavy min, an still as wack as you’ve ever been
if this your Final Form, then imma make it your Last Will & Testament
-Not bad. Haven’t seen this.
But since you love gun bars, imma let the heat wave bitch
You’ll get the message from the toaster like Sabrina The Teenage Witch
-I dig this. Like I said in another battle the message thing has been done to death but it’s a cool spin on it even though the reference is mad old. Liked it tho.
bitch i ain’t need name flips, the one your known as is fitting see
Cuz a Wanderers just a Wayfarer way of saying you’ve Nomad ability
-Nomad ability is cool but I wish you could’ve done this in a much cleaner fashion. Just ok to me.
Bitch you’ve beat no one respectable, im the 1-2 champ
Your more Andy Warhol.. career defined by a bunch of fuckin’ soup cans
-Light to me
Such a broke fuck I searched the Vault an all your battles were a poor bout
But if you want a "lone wanderer" I've got 100 caps for you when we fallout
-I don’t get this. Sorry.
U never see wand coming. Cruise to his crib via side routes and off him
There’s metal on the road in a country lane but believe there’s still an animal crossing
-Nothing stands out here.
Cos ur a bitch, dont try & fool me. I’ll just grab the M9 & pull b
That plant in ur hair with shells surrounding ur neck, it’s Hawaiian jewellery
-Yeh, I like this.
I’m balls deep in sluts & when the moment’s right I’m bustin in
We know any girl flowin’s just excusing herself from fuckin him
-Decent. Nice little jab.
Chicks text me “I’ve cooked ur fave baby” u take abuse. Ur a fuckin disgrace
If ur girl leave u a lip smacking message it’s “when I get home, I’m punching ur face”
-Lol kinda funny.
But no one cares about ur affairs, scrape out ur innards before u hurtin me
Hook knife journalism.. it get the scoop on ur internals for the world to see
-Pretty light.
Roll up my cuffs, fists make u scream & do 360’s til ur spine is severed
Pull the sleeves up & proceed to put u in a noisy spin, that’s a vinyl record
-Noisy spin is just too loose for me. Not really feeling this.
Broke ass mid tier at best! U’ll never get a champ match dropping them bars
Sorta like a girls options hooking up with u... cash/flow not on the cards
-Didn’t really like this.
Had to read this a few times because it was really close for me. This wasn’t the Flow I’ve been reading the past month. First verse I’ve read from Wanderer. I think I have to give it to Wanderer for being slightly more consistent and having 2 of the best 3 lines in the battle. Nice read guys.
Vote-Wanderer
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