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Old 05-09-2020, 01:56 PM   #10
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So serious vote here, the only lines that sin has that can possibly be interpreted as being a diss to his opponent his "I'll 'kill you' and you'll learn you're born.." which doesn't make any sense, and maybee "I 'killed sea' like Adam's thorn.." which would only make sense if Slecht has some alias with the name "Sea". Otherwise sinacog's verse was essentially just a non-sensical topical verse, so I can't really do much of a breakdown on it

Slecht

I'm navigating over emcee's but mess with me, you'll get tagged.
No need for us to cross the 7 seas to already know...Sinbad.

Funny opener. The whole 7 seas idea wouldn't generally be considered as an extra layer but since Sinacog is known for weird cryptic lines like this, I think it enhanced your bar.

Fuck ya devil tales. Demons trait 'n a true killer...U'll be checked & rattled.
It's funny to me you killed 50 zillion demons but can't stand up to a netcee in a battle.

This bar is a bit basic but it's funny.

here to bully & tease ya, leave ya & all ya features shook like a seizure
with set-ups that are purely fantasized, I'm starting to think you're conditioned with Paramnesia

I think you couldve attacked this concept in a different way and it wouldve landed harder.

I'll settle this with punches only. No need to murder ya with a weapon.
Put ya in box, they'll know I'm clearing sin out, ...no catholic priest hosting virtual confessions

"Sin" bars are already pretty played out, so you should definitely aim to be more out of the box with your thinking when trying to come up with bars like this

beat me, bro? no, in the ring - U'll need more than ur freak show, geek poem cheat-codes.
If Dragon's spitting fire, I'm giving ya body wings like Ricky Steamboat.

I like the general idea. Execution is okay, but it could've been a little smoother

another one for the books, u wheezy nerd will end up schooled & getting jumped
Ironically, putting an end to the Asthma Attacker when u get pulled up with the pump

Given the context from the quote, I thought this was a good bar

U get mimicked as a beginner, no1 mimicks me cuz I'm one of the sickest spitters.
Everyone will gather around & mockasin up cuz he's softer than indian slippers.

Okay wordplay, I don't feel like the wording is funny enough to make me lol nor is it aggressive enough to land as a haymaker



overall sinbad and asthma pump are the stand outs.

mvgt - slecht
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