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Old 05-07-2020, 12:53 PM   #95
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Originally Posted by Johnny 6 feet View Post
Lol, "Dude, you missed the character development of the cousin I set up in chapter 7 and her motivation for stealing the emerald necklace in chapter 12. It's intragyral for the group dynamic for the expedition to the Island that starts in chapter 23. You bloody philistines!"
Lmao word there's got to be limits because undoubtedly it would happen. I've got to admit though last week i wrote 50 and i really needed more room to work with, maybe like 60 but i suppose it depends what kind of story you tell mine was more focused around setting a stage and dialogue etc. Still don't think I could focus long enough to write 200 lines about the same thing
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