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Old 05-07-2020, 09:36 AM   #9
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No one wants to read your lame lines. this dude is a weak brawler
Voters avoiding ur battles so much next week Blue will make the mag even smaller

lol this is simple but it's witty, funny, and relevant to current events in the league. I thought it was a good opener 8.5/10

You drop lame punches! No members here think that your shit is tight
It's safe to say instincts, and I'd use mine to bet your losing this fight

Overall this is solid, the biggest drawback is it doesn't strike me as super original. Still worded well and lands as a solid job. 7.5/10

I'm the better writer here. You can't compare mine and his name
As soon as I discredit puts him or anything he's ever accomplished to shame

Again decent, execution is passable but I just get the feeling this bar's lacking a little something extra. 7.5/10

I'm praying you want beef.. cuz I got the goons strapped in the car ready to start it
Roll down the window n let the lead paint ya crib until your kids end up retarded

Nah, this is okay but to be honest the lead/gun thing has been done a lot and I do like the lead paint angle you took, but I just feel like the overall execution on this could've been improved on. 7.5/10

I let that heatwave like mexican summers.. I'm not someone you should engage wit
I'll squeeze the macadam until it becomes ironic that he's hitting the pavement

Nah. I made this comment when I voted on your last battle, you can't just butcher the way things are pronounced to get them to fit into your wordplay. Know your audience. I'm an active voter and I'll be making this same comment again next week if you do it again. 6/10

37/50 ==> 74%


Spent money to get dope can't pull them tricks here tho
Words turn to attempted murder have him crying uncle like its 6 years ago

This is an effective personal, I just think you could be a bit more out of the box with the angle here. 7/10

Makes trips for extra income my cash is so stacked literally
That phrase was confusing until I saw ur video battle, that's no contact delivery

This is a clever concept, though I personally generally prefer the set-up and punch to be in the same line. It feels a little dragged out for me. 7.5/10

1-2 u lost to a jizz concept and ur girl gets soothed from mine
Holding it back but couldn't manage, bitch laying defeated.....Blue cum line

Nah. I mean, dissing him for losing to a cum line could be an angle that works if it's funny enough, but I think the execution here could've used more work. It's a miss for me. 6/10

Had asked the ho, u swallow or spit? Said "was thinking ur pants or my skirt"
So I dropped a load right in her face for not responding like a Answer verse

Lol I'll probably be biased on this bar right off the bat because it applies to me, but I thought this was pretty funny. 8.5/10

His feedback last week was "I had no sting" "no punches here"
No Pontius where? I got a mean cross that'll Pilate u out the fkn stratosphere!!

Punches and Pontius is a bit of a stretch, though it is more acceptable to me than the macadam and mac at em wordplay. I just think this a bit more on the obscure side and not likely to land. You get creativity points, though. 7.5/10

36.5 / 50 ==> 73%


Overall, I thought this was fairly close and I can see it going either way. Favorite bar from FGR was his opener and favorite from Incredible was the load in your face bar. I think if I were to sum this battle up, I'd say that Incredible had the better ideas and most of the angles he took were fresh and/or relevant, but FGR was just more polished in terms of how he executes and words his bars. I think if Incredible swapped out the blue bayou line out with something a little bit stronger, I would've been leaning his way. That being said, FGR takes this by a thin margin with smoother implementation of his bars. FGR has proven he knows how to execute his ideas well, I just really don't want to see any more of these strappado or macadam bars from him in the future.

MVGT - FGR

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