How come you post all your OMs in a single thread? The new guy is confused.
Anywho, the last one had a good stand out line:
"I am the rainbow of asunder; the yellow lightning in the thunder"
But the rest was repetitive. Same handful lines again and again with the odd word flipped. I liked the imagery you were throwing around, but that mechanic made it more like a chant than an OM.
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