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Old 05-04-2020, 04:06 PM   #12
Johnny 6 feet
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Pharoahs Army- You took a big risk taking the alphabet approach to your piece. you could've found yourself restricting your creativity by the next letter (X?) not being convenient but you managed to pull it off. This came off as an employee in a museum describing the picture to an attentive crowd and it held my interest. I liked the characters and their relationship. it had real narrative flair, describing a perfect moment in time. Nice.

Deadman- More obscure in it's delivery and poetic in it's vocabulary than PA. This came off as very dark and deep. Hidden meanings between the lines. The punchline at the end of the piece was a really nice touch as well. Your choice of imagery was a stark contrast to the cheeriness of the picture you worked from.

Close one but...

Vote- PA, great battle guys.
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