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adverse, this was like a hybrid of blair witch and wicker man lulz. the story itself was engaging but it was lacking your usual level of writing. the flow were choppy at part but mostly, it didn't adhere to the strength of your writing. youre great at painting a picture, utilizing poetic language and palpable verbiage, however this was a bit understated compare to your other stuff you know? and against bodey you would have had to bring it all. But again, the story was engaging and it was transfixed the whole time wondering what will happen next lulz.

bodey, this was mad chilling; very twilight zone. I like time paradox concepts and i really like the way you went about this. And i liked that it stirred the emotional well also. the flow was crisp, the rhyming was very good. good use of description, you even managed to make sarcasm work, which can be hard in this type art form. "Now you’ve got a chance, ghosts are defenseless against sticks!” that was great.

v/bodey. i think she had a more well rounded verse. Adverse still told a good story but it was missing in other key components in comparison to his opponent this week. very enjoyable read guys.