Adverse- This was a pretty cool verse. Thought your wording was harsh. A few played concepts (50/50, share thoughts, but you put a cool twist on it). But overall I liked most of it. I thought Dutch was really good.
Rican- Verse wasn’t bad. I think you hit the “Ad” thing too many times and none of them wowed me. I thought the wording was a little sloppy throughout. Adverse city was a little obvious but not bad. Overall a few ok lines and a few misses.
This was a cool battle but I have Adverse winning for better wording and better concepts.
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