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pa:
good flip on style.. i really liked it with the rhyme scheme in how tight the lines were with a style like that is very hard so much respect i def loved the flip on it with the grotesque zoo drop.. it def added a sad but happy laugh to it.. but the small story was cool though your concept was the coolest part..

dead man:
pretty cool little tale i think you hit hardest with description and slight even though def in your face emotion.. the story itself was very colourful it was at a decent pace and was really a compfortable pace.. i def liked the capture of the reader.. i really do think the flow of this was nice..

vote = pharaohs army

i think he just had a tighter verse with taking on a tougher style and coming out strong with it.. gl guys