namix this was dope. you really brought both characters to life and made what is in essence a philosophical conversation into rhyme form. this would work wonderfully as a song with two MCs going back and forth. or one person using two different voices. reminded me ALOT of that Damien track by DMX. if you have never listened to it, you have to stop what your doing right now and youtube it. love that song. and this was on that tip. but deeper.
very good stuff, as far as the no razzle dazzle of using multis or complex structure, it helped this piece. because it enhanced the smoothness of it. which is hard in a verse like this to have. great read. pz.
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