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Originally Posted by NoetiC
in vulgars verse, his first 3-4 lines didnt rhyme at all, am i missing something, it just really stood out for me cause i just felt like i was reading lines from a book. maybe im missing it and can be pointed it out, thanks...
Slow, solemn walk past the local Ikea
His carpenter coat gave off smells of blonde
No idea why he needed total privacy to check the weather that day
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That was just for an picture challenge it’s not an official battle so the rules are a bit relaxed. Plus tbh here we don’t linger over that unless the entire verse doesn’t rhyme. Glad to have you on board and thanks for checking out the league