Alright I'll just say it. I can't get into Scar's verses. It's not a personal thing. I'm sure he's a good guy but I am just not captivated by his style, all the way down to the different fonts and italics. So this woman has nostalgia for the salmon pies, and drinks a lot of wine, remembering a lost love and a special date.
I'm not even a great writer and I wouldn't be offended if someone said it about me. It's just a stylistic thing. He's fancy and simple at the same time, but there's no "there" there, so I guess I'm biased. Probably should have just not voted and taken the punishment, but it's good to have different perspectives and votes sometimes.
But Inno's verse here is not that great either, with a few misspellings and it looks like a rush job, particularly the first stanza. Second stanza is better. I'd really like to see better here. Don't know how well you tied in gluttony, some other sins seemed to be sprinkled about. Eating away at their morals for sports good line.
I'm gonna vote Inno here but I really don't want to vote for either. Sorry if that sounds harsh but just how this one went for me.
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