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Old 04-26-2020, 03:12 PM   #9
Sharp
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Wander for too long & get checked for bread.
God! Son. You've battled life but this week? Dead like Fred.
God son is cool, but the rest of the punchline is a little lacking. Good concept
It might get harry when none of your bars get mentioned.
school you, I'm taking wand out like a Hogwarts Suspension.
While he's gotten a lot of magic wand nameplays, I haven't seen this exact one. It's alright, but a little basic and the wording isn't that harsh
I'm disfiguring you & your fat bae with an ax blade
Ice hatchets to y'all face, catching these picks like it's Draft Day.
lmao cool
Slecht gets busy. I'll release the piece in a jiffy if need be.
got keys that'll cover wander, without impersonating Stevie.
Haven't seen a keys play in a while. Wander/Wonder is a bit of a stretch for me but its alright
Try to alter my state of being and I might go off quick,
giving Wander an out of body experience, no Pyschonautics
Psychonautics/out of body experience is a cool idea, but the execution here is basic



Man lockdown got me noticing everything u pen’s fuckin lame
Bars so rushed & unfinished they put quarantine hair cuts to shame
considering he wound up keying this is cool
Archaeological concepts! That mean they’re dated and light
Get skinned by the blade at night... That brush with the metal uncover ur bones like excavation sites
cool
U can’t please a crowd so I’ll help, for this reason I keep the stowed nina
The slide moves & everyone watch that shit pour out ur mouth, keynote speaker
again, cool
Tryna’ camp out like he can defend.. the blade mean ur meeting ur end
Roll up on ur base with that sharp edge like I was sharing pizza with friends
like... a pizza cutter? something about this is a little off for me
Probs get harassed by teens on ur block, just die. The silenced tools’ll do
When it ring cops don’t pay attention but this time ain’t kids prank calling u
execution feels a little scattered



I got wanderer with a few harder hits.
v/wanderer
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