Cash:
First two were cool, but I've seen the angles @ RB. Opener was decent then next i liked a lil better but was a bit telegraphed. Wording ok here. Bust at Seams wasn't too much a fan off. Tua line was cool (had the idea myself lol) Handwriting was cool visual line, liked it. Didn't fk w/ the Wheel of Fortune line. It was creative idea but some reason I didn't think feel how you did it. Closer was good/worded ok. Standouts: Gronk, Handwriting Flow, Tua.
Letter:
Opener was cool, liked the execution here just straight at him nothing crazy tho. Israelite I've seen the led in desert seems familiar but made it better overall concept if that helped greatly for an otherwise old wp. Incest line was alright not bad a little long concept. Didn't like deceit. Compubox was dope. 40 Meter a bang hit. Closer was played to me/ not worded or flipped great either. Nice try tho.
Compubox, 40 Meter were heaters from Lett.
Mad close & hard to judge here. Let had two heaters but at least two outright misses to me.....Cash had more consistency somewhat. Need to re-read. Think I'm going w/ Cash bc the misses weren't quite as bland to me.
Good battle bros, but vote - Cashius
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