I feel like an echo chamber here but have to agree with the majority on this one, MMLP has a nice verse chocked full of great content and more technical proficiency over PA’s submission. I especially liked the theme of God and the Devil, it’s a risk given these topics have been approached before but I enjoyed the approach and it’s execution with the twist at the finish as he’s somewhat known to do now. This was a marked improvement on last weeks verse for sure.
Pharoah: I loved your opening line, maybe conceptually you could have fleshed it out more but this was a difficult topic to really make into something unique. It was limiting and I felt it did limit you somewhat also content wise, that said it had its moments for sure. The mid section in particular reminded me of me when I adopt a more broken-down-bar stance to my verses.
Good battle, vote - MMLP
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