[Neighbor]

Cashius

It was like a contest to see who’s writtens is worse, the shit got me irked...wow
Took the LLL. But HERE, you would’ve only taken one...and it would’ve been in the first round
Decent opener - the personal angle lended itself to the punch well. Read a little telegraphed due to the setup, but the wording was clean; a good start
A 12 line champ match after 2 rounds?! This should be nothing but obvious, brethren
Compared to NBL that’s a JV league...So, why the FUCK would we call you a Letterman
Simple, but effective - a nice play off the opener that kept w/ the personal angle. I like these shorter lines from you; it wasn’t a huge punch, but the directness added some sting
Shoot every thread of your shirt ‘til you dead or you hurt...you leavin’ this world open
When I ‘bust at the seams, you getting stretched’...like every piece of your girls clothing
Wasn’t feeling this one.. just seen too many concepts similar to it & tying it in w/ his girl seemed too indirect to me. It was still worded & delivered well, just didn't feel like it landed
Forensics in awe of my knife work...never seen so much amplified neck squirt
I’ll have the cops analyzing Letters Flow...WITHOUT their handwriting expert
Yup. Again, a straightforward punch w/ clean wording & great execution.. not a haymaker by any means, but the fact that you're able to formulate these creative, well-packaged jabs so consistently is really impressive
Multiple guns to ya squad. You wanna hold-heat-like-Cash?...go see the draft
Tua come out the pocket and cause injury concerns...then your whole team’ll pass
Fire (& you just ruined a line I wrote similar to this for next week, which makes it even better)
Brother spends thousands on caucasian pussy...but puts on an act where he’s mad tough
Wheel of Fortune...’Letter’ll flip for this White bitch’ ‘til this Black Square is Bankrupt
Another creative & conceptually sound bar. Again, not a showstopper - but tying together a truly unique angle like this w/ a relative setup, crisp wording & impactful punch while not being overstated is really rare
You left NC and took RB’s title. But in the NBL...you can’t recover your best days
You’re Gronk...claimed a fake belt, then came back to the league to do nothing but catch fades
This was dope; a creative & relevant closer worded near-perfectly


Letterman

Beam on the gun. It’ll prove I aint messing w/ this faggot
It’s like sending a text thru MMS - you’ll get the message with the attachment
Simple, but effective.. the "text/message" tie-in's been played out, but this was a fresh spin on it & was worded really well
Ur an easy kill. Eagle out.. I’ll have you dead without the effort
& everyone will see that he Israelite, once this bitch gets led out the desert
Again, I've seen the "Israelite" wordplay used in the past, but you kept the setup clean & the punch itself gave it a unique spin; definitely the best I've seen. I fuck w/ the bar as a whole
U come from a long line of incest. That’s why imma let the tool lift, scrap
I’ll run in & raise a couple in your home.. but your family should already be used to that
This's funny.. not really a hard-hitting punch, but I haven't seen a concept used like that before, much less a bar about incest lol.. wording was clean & delivered well
We both got entertaining bars, but urs are lies. He could never be me
Cuz I keep the building suspenseful.. & this fraud only keeps them on the edge of deceit
Wasn't feeling this. The setup tied in to the punch well enough, but "keep the building suspenseful" sounded kinda corny to me & "edge of deceit" hearkened me back to those dreaded "defeat" bars. It's creative, so you get points for that; but as a conceptual insult/punch goes, I think it was a miss
U thrive off easy wins. So when it comes to being number one, you not
Cuz I’ve checked your stats, & you’ve never had to count on punches with the compubox
Fire.. no real critiques, aside from maybe making your wording a little harsher to build up the impact. This was a dope bar (& possibly my favorite of the battle, so far).. creative concept that was packaged almost flawlessly - my hat's off to you
1st I’ll shoot your bitch.. & if you stick around then you get the chrome, son
So that means after the 40 meter, dash.. or else you won’t make it in the long run
Again, this is fire - straight to the point w/ crisp wording & no fluff. I could read 100 lines of this
Funerals are expensive, so it’s a shame that relatives gotta view ur death then
But your family will see cold, hard cash.. cuz they’ll be watching u as the rigamortis sets in
A very solid punch, but unfortunately it fell flat to me as I used the exact same nameplay against him in a Fight Night Finals like 7 years ago.. not that anyone would expect you to know that. For what it's worth, I used it as my closer then, too

Overall, this was the battle I was looking forward to the most & it didn't disappoint. I knew Cash was going to bring it - the guy's been on a tear for almost a decade now & hasn't let up; he rarely slacks & even his misses would be considered quotables for most ppl. I had heard of Letterman, but never read anything from him.. & I'm glad I got the chance. He had some really sound concepts w/ great wording & execution, albeit a few angles I've seen before. Will definitely be looking forward to seeing more from him

All in all, I think Cashius outpaced Letter here; he brought fresher angles w/ more relevance & just threw volume throughout his verse. It's tough to beat that kind of consistency. Letterman's verse would be a problem for almost anyone signed in atm, but I would've liked to see him get more personal w/ Cash & go for broke. Cheers, fellas

v/ Cashius