obviously, you have some sort of delusion going on that you are not a thug, and thats why this verse was a major downage for me.. well, I say this because your lyrics, and language reflect thuggetry, for one.. including your avatar but hence you say..
"Thugs leave our hoods with techs & scars, this test is ours"
In a act of socialism and being pro like, you shouldnt of never incorporated that saying.. you cannot fight fire with fire in a war between two dialects which reflect eachother.. be different, stand out and stay true to your vision.. it was hypocritical.. but never the less, on a grand scale of skill, I would say that ths verse was trash and wayy off topic.. you need to grow.. mentally, then cultivate hiphop in its truest form.. 100
__________________
|