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Universe · 04-21-2020, 01:06 PM

Sinacog - Sinacog does what Sinacog does here; Drops a random half assed verse that makes sense to no one but him. He even felt it was necessary to include a "I am the masterbation of the universe" line, which disturbed me. But, yeah, par for the course I suppose.

Candy - This verse needed a lot of work... I mean a lot. But at least you kind of keyed in on your topic. I found some decent moments here and there. Next time just don't rush to post so quick... I want to see more effort from you going forward. Not that it was needed here... but still.

Vote - MMLP's last weeks verse...

... aka Candyman.

04-21-2020, 01:06 PM	#5
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Sinacog - Sinacog does what Sinacog does here; Drops a random half assed verse that makes sense to no one but him. He even felt it was necessary to include a "I am the masterbation of the universe" line, which disturbed me. But, yeah, par for the course I suppose. Candy - This verse needed a lot of work... I mean a lot. But at least you kind of keyed in on your topic. I found some decent moments here and there. Next time just don't rush to post so quick... I want to see more effort from you going forward. Not that it was needed here... but still. Vote - MMLP's last weeks verse... ... aka Candyman. __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..