mmlp this was another welcomed twist this week. another clever take on the topic my friend def get some points for that. the wording was smooth and the story was well told. you brought that twist ending just at the right time. although I gotta say I didn't enjoy the last 3-4 lines. I thought they could of been more impactful tbh. overall it was a dope verse that was written with good precision.
scar ill be honest I don't Virginia wolf so the reference gets lost on me. as far as the content goes. I thought this was dope as far as the wording and imagery. you where able to paint a dope scene that I could picture in my head. I'm assuming she's talking to her self in the mirror and thinking she's getting responses from other people. nicely done man. your verse had steam from the get which will probably be the deciding factor.
I thought mmlps verse took a bit to get started where as scar had it going from the jump. could be a toss up if you ask me but this time it lands on scar.
|