Inf-
Burdhouse- Connections carried this. Nice.
Mccormick-not catching the first part of the wordplay. So, this fell a bit flat to me.
Lockdown-Yeh, this was dope.
Gloves off-this concept and connections were dope. Would’ve liked it to end a little different.
Teetering-Cool. Liked it. Had to read teetering a few times tho.
Orc-
One punch man- just ok to me
Resume-Yeh liked that.
Suicide note-A little too similar to line before. Prolly like this one better.
Discharge- ok
Ringing a bell-Cool-feel like you could’ve made it harsher or had another connection.
Cool battle guys. But I think Inf took it. I feel like his creativity and connections overtook Orc’s humor. I don’t think this was up to Orc’s normal standard and this was the best inf verse I’ve read in a minute.
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