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Old 04-17-2020, 06:41 PM   #9
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Aura
they say when u pass on lights emit of different shades like a beam
so when u Diverse, gonna see every color come together like MLK's i have a dream
be on life support, all kinds of shit in his mouth til he finds heaven
once the doc comes in and gives YouTube Ad, it'll all be over in 5 seconds
amid throwing lefts he'll see symbols circle over his head
so many stars around Verse, gonna look like Sinacog posted in our thread

Adverse
After last week's blunder i need a body got the heater in my hand itchin'
Leave you lifeless they'll find Oracle and need a medium to chat with him
Don't take a genius to see he ain't bringing a pump to war with son
Even college dropouts know you'll never have to Duck from an Oregon

I've got 3 quotables for Aura here, but it's really like 2.5, because the middle line wasn't worded properly both ways for me. It only really works if you read it as 'gives you a tube, Ad'. It doesn't work with 'doc comes in and gives YouTube Ad', because a doctor giving a youtube ad doesn't make sense. For Adverse, I'm assuming you meant 'they'll find Aura cool' in your first bar, as in cold and lifeless. I got 2 light quotables for Adverse. Aura's quotables were stronger and his wording, in general, was better.

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