[Universe]

Triple threat time... Let's go!

brokenhal0 - Technically a decent verse here. Some consistent multi's throughout and I found some cool wordplay sprinkled in there as well. But besides that, this piece reminded me of a puzzle where the pieces were forced together because they don't belong to the same puzzle... a lot of random chaos. I love topicals because of the stories and quite frankly, I just didn't get one here... And I felt myself losing interest near the middle because of it. I loved how you posted early though... just attacked the topic and went right in. Kudos on that.

Objective - This was one of my favorite verses I've seen from you yet. This week you really nailed the vibe of a topical and combined your skills with telling a pretty cool story.

"As each others experiment he bring his hand to her cheeks
dirty as sewer pipes leading to creeks yet honest and sweet."

Loved this line ^^. Some amazing imagery here. Great job this week man... Inno better bring it.

Inno - Inno... Some slick imagery as always, with a metaphorical weight behind it that gives it all just enough credence.

"colors a little dull now, little fading around her borders
Still clings to my heart, now jaded and old
still clean though I might have stains to my soul
and I blame her...."

This was a solid take on a pretty difficult topic to nail down. Although not quite up to the level of your week 2 verse, it still does enough to make an impact. Although, misspelling "were" in the final line dampens the effect unfortunately. Small thing but having to re-read the ending line because it didn't make sense took away some of the momentum for me. But, that said... your point had already been made.

Okay... So this comes down to Objective and Inno in my mind. Both were sort of alluding to the same concepts but one came off a little clearer than the other. A little more poetic, in my mind. I love Objrctive's verse this week but it just wasn't enough to take down Inno's here.

Vote - Inno

Good work all around fellas.