[Flow]

I'm going to have to vote Orc here. No hate Inf I thought you were hands and above the more creative puncher here and thought your birdbox bar was dope. Felt you just came to out there for me in some of these an I really had to get the cogs turning, I appreciate you've used your words carefully and kept the flow tight but I needed a bit more direction to help me got the bars straight away. Sometimes that realisation moment really makes a bar, but having that nearly bar after bar sort of takes away from the impact.

Orc came with a much simpler.approach but he kept the lolz and personals to point. Hit the same.angle a bit but it worked here and felt like a sort of old school dumbfounded clowning style. The suicide note and the resume edit were.my personal.favourites even though they were quite similar.in angle. I actually prefer the resume bar even though the suicide bar was a double personal and alot more mean in nature.

Got orc edging this but definately the best battle I've read thus far.

Good work fellas

V orc