Scar: Stylistic. Science-fiction inspired for sure. I'm feeling this vibe. Really interesting and cool take on battling cancer. How feeling strong and empowering helps you through rough periods of it all. At first I didn't like the Star Wars references at all, felt it was detracting from the story as a whole, but as the story wrapped itself up with a girl battling cancer it made sense in a heartwarming kind of way. Definitely good shit, enjoyed the read a lot.
Brokenhal0: Cool intro, IBM, 1970s old school shit. Definitely going down the nerd path, I like it. Not sure if it'll hold as a vote but I'm digging the vibe and shit you're touching on. Definitely catching the "Hello, world!"-atmosphere. You went technical on this one, "zero value overflow"-line was a pretty cool way of explaining it all. This was an abstract piece, hard to truly get a story across tho but I thought it was cool the way you conveyed the evolution of it all and how it died to the topic given.
Vote: Interesting and entertaining battle for sure. My vote goes to @
Scar for a way more fleshed out and intriguing story. Brokenhal0 gad some cool concepts but the story wasn't fleshed out nor that engaging outside of being a cool piece of trivia scattered about with hints of a main character devloping some next gen system. A bit more work from Hal0's end in terms of story and the verse as a whole and it could have been a really dope battle from start to finish, but as it stands now Scar takes the easy W.