[Objective]

MMLP: Pretty straight forward story paying the picture justice. I love the visuals of a broken man stuck in the 9-5 system feeling utterly helpless and used. References to alcoholism of feeling overworked and undervalued. Vengeance at the man takes place at the end. Decent write up, definitely seen better from you tho.

Bodey: A story of hopelessness and despair, someone going through mental illness of some sort. I'd put my bets on depression and regrets of past mistakes. Going through the motions of life and then coming out of it all as renewed with a new perspective on things. I liked where you were going with it but I feel like it could have been fleshed out a little bit more, it seemed a bit brainstormy to me at times but overall a decent write up. Would have liked to see more.

Vote: Seen better from both but @MMLP gets my vote on the basis that his verse was better fleshed out and with a more intriguing story. If Bodey had spent more time on her verse it and fleshed out the story a little bit more she could have snatched the vote. As it stands MMLP gets my vote.