I don’t know I’m conflicted..
MMLP I like the way you find new and unconventional ways to work your photo topic into something completely different than the picture is at face value. I feel like you always find new ways to be innovative and it shows this week. I wasn’t a huge fan of your topic here though. Was never much of a wrestling fan so maybe it’s just personal preference? I did like the whole flow and progression of your story, but the story didn’t resonate with me on a personal level which isn’t mandatory in my criteria but is honestly something I really enjoy.
Bodey, it’s well documented that I’m a huge fan of your writing, and I am constantly impressed by the level of quality you bring to the table while cramming to get done at the deadline, and though you worked my senses and brought me into your story with a few bars (rob zombie line, cherry of my Newport etc) I felt like your entry was half baked and could only think about how much more I would have enjoyed it if you worked on it on and off for over the week you were given. Honestly think the way you bring in personal elements just captures your reader, but it doesn’t mean anything if you have a rushed conclusion and don’t take the time to flesh out your piece.
So yeah technically I liked Bodey’s piece more but I’m giving MMLP the win here because he was more consistent and from front to back told the better tale. Keep writing y’all
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