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Old 04-11-2020, 11:00 AM   #7
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I'm pretty sure you went over the line limit again you bastard lol. That aside (stop that), this was another beautiful verse. And I mean like beautiful. Some of these lines were nothing short of masterful and it's a piece that only gets better with a second read through..
(Which I did right away). I loved the afterlife/purgatory angle of this... sort of echo'd my own piece this week... just on the other side of the spectrum. Great minds, as they say... This drop actually exceeded your 1st week's verse and is your best yet... I look forward to reading your stuff every week and this solidifies you as a top threat in the GWL. Well done, sir.

Sidenote: I'm probably saying goodbye to the league if they hand me the DQ loss against Bayou. I wish you the best going forward my man. I'm cheering for ya.
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