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Old 04-11-2020, 02:34 AM   #8
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Okay, let's get into it. Finally.

MMLP - this was dope as fuck to me. I'm a wwe mark so I LOVED how it was a mini biography about Austin and his come up within the business. Especially with his broken skull sessions podcast he's doing now... it just all seemed to fit. I must admit I didn't catch on to what you were up to even with all of your trigger words and phrases perking up my ears... I knew it was building to something I just didn't know what. The reveal brought a smile to my face... always a good thing. I really appreciate and respect the approach you take on your topicals... you GET it. And the twists you save for the final bar always end it with a bang.... and that's the bottom line like an ass crack.

Bodey - First off, you were mad late, not good. But at least you dropped. The problem is, this was just an average verse in every possible way. I mean it was solid for sure, but not anything mind blowing. It seemed thrown together and most likely was. Definitely not enough to take out MMLP here. You were behind the 8 ball from the get go and really needed to shine to get the W... it just wasn't enough this week. Props for dropping though and not no showing. I think you still have a lot to offer this league (when motivated).

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