dead ass i was looking forward to this battle. I think Blue is really good on the topical side too. Seen his stuff from the last season of aowl. but anyway, yeah i am going to award Universe the win here.
universe, i'll be honest, i'm loving this ongoing series you got going. I've been doing the same format at another site so i think its dope that you are using the weekly topic to dictate the direction of your story. I like the somber tone of this verse. The ending was very eerie. The flow was clean as fuck. The cadence was very easy to latch on to. The only issue i had were some of the awkward wording for the sake of rhyming. like "perilously led" that was a strange choice of adverb. Other than that, this was a very dope verse my man.
blue what happened bro lulz. well for what its worth, it showed your penchant for battle. I would like to see some real effort from you because your able to blend flow with poetry pretty seamlessly. maybe it was time or responsibility that prevented a full fledge commitment but i was excited when i saw this matchup.
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