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Old 04-10-2020, 02:26 AM   #19
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Originally Posted by The Dead Poet View Post
I mean to me this sounds like what happens when a txt rapper tries to spit. It's too wordy and cluttered. Lyrics are better to read...but that's not the point here.

yeah I kind of agree with that @The Dead Poet


but @Adverse it still wasn't bad though ... accapella rapping a text verse is a really hard thing to do its going to sound choppy


but with that being said you did a pretty good job with this... I liked the carol baskin line


god damn bitch, fuck carol baskin (joe exotica voice)
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