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Originally Posted by dull boy
Lungs are flooded. Suffocate on suffering.
Such a fucking waste. Blood is bubbling.
Busted mains buckle under numbness weight.
Hold me down. Punch my face.
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I like the rhymes here. I realize they continue but I liked this section the most. For what it's worth I thought it looked/read better in paragraph format so you maybe shouldn't have changed it. But that's just my opinion