Read Ender's verse before Larkin ever posted and thought it was a weird read, not the typical battle verse i was used to seeing, you can tell he's cut from a different cloth definitely. I liked the ass for sure, rust off bars, Larkin had some decent ideas but execution fell flat on quite a few as well, really liked the Moses staff bar, thought you spent way too much time on political content and should have been a little more clever/harsh. I don't know, Ender stuck out more to me so I'd give him the W. Good work.
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