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Old 03-30-2020, 07:07 PM   #11
Adverse
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Thing i like about a Universe piece is you COMMIT to whatever you're doing, you keep the punches rolling knowing that there'll definitely be some misses here and there but you just don't let up and i admire that. Think my favorite bars came right in a row

"You anti-biotic so death is sealed, now you tetris-cyclin' down so fast
Keep a mellow-tone-in-fact, I'm a pro and that's just how Prozac
I'm only popping caps if the bottle snaps, that's hard for kids to twist
Subtract civilians and Advil'ns like a hero's arch nemesis"

Liked the last little narrative on the coronavirus as well was a nice change of pace from the rapid fire of the first verse. Hit me up to collab sometime i think we could do something dope
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