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Old 03-30-2020, 06:57 PM   #2
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I dug this. It was a super long read but you told a decent enough story and your style was kind of reminiscent of like New York State Of Mind II esque Nas? And the subject matter and descriptions of events brought me back to Niggaz Bleed by BIG as well. I don't think you broke the mold or anything, subject matter was pretty basic and like i said reminiscent of some other classics, but i liked the concept and thought you kept your audience engaged as well as had a pretty fluid flow throughout. So cool shit keep droppin
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