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Originally Posted by Universe
No, you didn't. You just thought it was an original thing to say... (it isn't.) Plus, there's other ways to connect rhyme schemes together that doesn't necessarily involve the final one or two syllables of a line.
Please refer to my Beginner's Guide below (which you clearly need), for any further information.
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142140
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Universe. I just wanna say: your verses are for the most part good. but your wordplay is corny as ffffffff Please refrain from it,
Using this thread to link multiple OM pieces. We got it. You're better than average. Maybe slow down on the wordplays.