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Old 06-14-2013, 11:22 AM   #7
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This was pretty cool, nothing too big
the first verse was written nicely, kind of odd ball-ish
but it still had a decent usage of lines up in that ish
the second verse was cool...after reading it was keyed
I applaud you for the quick reaction...either way
you two seem to mesh well together, you just need a topic
regardless...dope drop fella's
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