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Old 03-18-2020, 08:19 PM   #4
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This is right up their with the piece you wrote about your father.

In a way, it’s written almost as if it provides context and closure to all the other half written love poems and soulmate eulogies you’ve blessed us with over the years. Poignant, visceral and emotive — visual and empathetically written with both her ghost and the audience in mind. Impressive. Loved it. Peace.
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