Objective:
Occasionally your end rhymes don't rhyme.
But I really see how yours connects to the picture with the "overworked" theme.
I pray you like your mobile games today.
This closer meant everything. Tied the thing together and got you my vote.
Exis:
I am not really "getting" what your theme is or how it relates to the picture.
You do have the dopest couplet of the battle though. I really liked:
I'm sick & tired of makin' flames gather in the same pattern
So I'm mixin' ink & white out tryna create more grey matter
Good stuff. But not enough to take it this week
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