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Old 03-15-2020, 02:36 PM   #11
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Think NYC took this too lightly, no doubt dude is a topical legend but he either A. Thought he was being no showed or B. Just doesn't give a shit. Lol couple okay bars but like Candy said it was a cypher verse hard to accept as a topical.

As for Inno, i thought he wrote on an "safe subject" when regarding the picture but i liked his story through and through and thought it was super relatable, it read smooth and was pretty straight to the point, had some decent vocabulary and imagery here and there and i liked the conclusion. You didn't need much to win this week but i think you did more than enough and am excited to see you get a head of steam as the week's progress!

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