[Candy]

objective:

dope dude, your rhyme scheme was off the hook very original kinda loose but some tight internals def to your own style. story wise i liked the computer aged over working aspect covered in this def gave it a wide spread. i thought it was very flushed out and polished.. tight piece dude..

exis:
nice you def covered the overworked element i could feel the over tide. first person mc piece was cool you def in the right company lol.. cool lil piece to me it read smoothly and was complete and easy to flow through.. pretty cool dude..

vote = objective

just more flushed out, it was his coverage of detail in a story the rhyme scheme was a bit tighter to but yeh it was the story detail that did it cause exis style was tight to. gl guys