Kudos to both for posting on time. Deadlines matter.
That said, both verses swung wildly off topic before being casually reeled in. This was my worry with pictures. Topicals are about telling a compelling story, I think both would've done better to draw inspiration from the picture and focus it down to one single story ark. Commit to it and go for it.. Keep it SIMPLE. Tell us a story. Give us some surprise twist. You will get the vote.
In the end, Objective stayed on topic the most.
Vote - Objective
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..Passed the Present and Future..
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