It's a love poem about a break up with some straight forward advice to go with it. Don't really got much more to say about it, you put your heart into it and that's cool but it needs something more to catch my attention, specially on a topic that has been done A LOT by people in the past. Cool to see poetry up in here tho.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o
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