Honestly i liked the clash of styles here it made for an interesting matchup!
Objective there was a lot to digest in your verse, it made me feel exhausted which really put me into your character's shoes the flood of thoughts he was experiencing I was also part of and it kind of stressed my brain out a little bit not to lie lol i enjoyed it immensely though. And i also liked how it all summed up to "i hope you enjoy your mobile games today." I think we take a lot of the behind the scenes work that goes into media for granted, just like the array of jobs there are to do, the deadlines the immense pressure of critics etc. It's definitely a lot to take in. I thought your vocabulary and flow were pretty good, you really showed out here and i was impressed by your verse.
Exis i was pleasantly surprised reading your verse, I've often thought your verses are sort of formulaic? You have your niche that you're good with and you usually stick to it but i felt you attempting to tread other paths here and i liked that. The last 8 bars of your first verse and that little 4 bar break you had i thought were dope but after that your verse kind of collapsed and i didn't like the closing bit as much as some of the other stuff. You had a decent attempt but i think Objective just told a much more compelling story and i enjoyed his product more, maybe try telling your story from a different perspective next week instead of first person? And don't be afraid to mix it up, add some vocab, i thought your flow was good so just add a few things and keep elevating. Nice battle y'all
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