i have no idea how to feed this so im going to just quote some parts i enjoyed
So-so I write just for the sake of nodding my head with a yo-yo weight.
i liked just the thought of this here, pretty creative imo
Today's age is the era of deception labeled as creativity and sold in payment plans.
^^this
Raised not literally in the physically. But figuratively praised a lot whimsically. Or rather, creatively as faded spots in the imaginary. Grown locally most organically. Drawn from deep wells like how air feeds a organ manically.
this might have been the most poetic you've gotten so far lol, well in the rhyming sense
Don't mislead me with fisted hits, just wait and in sequence we all re-seed this shit. Grow tall plants, harvest community, bleed change fitted with ingredients.
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I hear the body cry so pleadingly. Knowing that it don't know. Growing fine lines, aging as though it won't show. How misleading it can be, or so seemingly needless to stand so fleetingly free. Going down now.
When the body is electric please don't fight all functions that of which makes your height sandwich some tall assumptions: Crying, lying, cheating, hurting. That's all we seem to do. So good.
this part really stood out to me, in terms of deepness and a real poetic feel, probably my favorite portion yet
His music hosts ghostly images boastfully posted as mostly imitating us. It's creatively sequenced legitimate expression, forced by torqued individuality sessions split in two divisional duality questions.
slick shit sir
Remember the intelligent hare and the dubious turtle. Relevant pair and the obvious curdle. Of blood. The octave notation sounds a conclave staff blunting perfect pitch. Convex snitch stone. Octagon victory prone.
loved how you turned this childhood classroom story into this epic battle to the death lol
Rule of thumb, march out-of-step to your defiant drum. Sharks will come. Chum the venom...Line the path with a lesser taken cadence. Radiance of absence. Flagrance of credence. Not clear water revival at all, but truth in actual.
powerful closer, gotta be careful how much of a ripple in the water you make
so first fuck you for writing a piece this long, ridiculous dude.. like seriously. but anyways yea this was dope, not like what i normally see around here but i like that, it gives me something fresh. i do like the abstractness of this, i get too sidetracked when writing to do something like this but if i wasn't inspired before i definitely am now. nice peace man.
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