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Old 02-18-2020, 11:58 AM   #6
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Didn't know there hadn't been a vote on this

Flow - see what you were going for but think it just got lost in the wording, the sting wasn't really there for me, it may just be personal preference i don't know.

Hab - pretty decent hit, didn't think it had too much bite to it but was still good enough to take this (on first read i thought adieu was a shot at me i was going to swing lol jp)

But in all honesty i think Hab gets this, had more weight behind imo

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